Feedback from Mr Corkish - A reasonable start to your project. You have outlined your ideas through taking pictures and looked at 1 photographer. Your ideas would be clearer if you completed mind maps and mood boards. You should also make sure you have critically analysed your work.
Next Steps - My next steps will be to make my ideas more clearer by completed mind maps and moodboards and i should also make sure i critically analyse my work.
Next Steps - My next steps will be to make my ideas more clearer by completed mind maps and moodboards and i should also make sure i critically analyse my work.